It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan?
If someone decide to build new building such as restaurant in my neighborhood, I would support it. Because of three reasons including make access easy, our neighborhood will famous and create financial advantage for neighborhood. These reasons will discuss in following paragraphs.
First of all, people in my neighborhood access to restaurant easily. Since I like to eat food in restaurant instead of homes and go to restaurant frequently, so I can spend less time and money for go to restaurant. For instance, I go restaurant with my friends three times a week, to this we have to spend two hours in way and around 10 dollars for taxi fare, through restaurant is far and we must take a taxi.
Furthermore, it would be symbol of neighborhood if cook and serve food in high quality. Meanwhile, by providing suitable service such as food quality, price, diverse menu; and warm and friendship atmosphere for costumer can make it famous and attract people from other parts of city or even from the other countries. Because there is an ancient church in our neighborhood which is recorded in universe unique place institution (UUPI) as a world’s third oldest church of history. In addition, this new restaurant can be a proper place for going outside with friends or have a meeting with my colleagues or managers.
Last but not less, this new restaurant would have financial merit for neighborhood. In this way that when people come from other parts of city to eat food in the restaurant, which is established in my neighborhood, need efficient transportation and people would spend money to buy other things like clothes or other personal staffs. So it leads to a cash flow in neighborhood’s market.
In conclusion, building restaurant in my neighborhood will have some advantages, so I agree with this decision. This essay mentioned three major reasons to support this idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
If someone decide to build new building such as restauran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, third, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00955414013 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03841851937 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525477707006 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0687014084 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.866666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190312790683 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799798385948 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522027367171 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124030635493 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251123619143 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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