many people visit museum when they travel to new places. why do you think people visit museums?
There are a lot of places for tourists to visit. Most of people like to visit ancient place or the place where old things keep such as museum. This essay will discuss its reasons in the following paragraphs and answer this question that why museums are popular among tourists.
First of all, visiting museum is one of the best interesting when people go to another country. Museums are full of unique things such as sculptures, paintings, weapons and etc. So visiting museum can be memorable activity which leads to create nice and memorable time.
Furthermore, visitors can learn many things about countries history and get some use full information about past policy, historical events, culture and art of country. These information can help to compare status of country with its past. For instance, two years ago I went to Iran with my family and visited Sad-Abad museum – the most famous and greatest museum of Iran which is split to 5 smaller part. There r ancient books, carpets, guns and variety of painting- where was in Tehran. There was a narrator who explained about things history. I compered Iran’s geographical map in two ages and realized that in contract to before age (2500 years ago), Iran’s border get closer and it get smaller than before.
Last but not less, from financial expect it is so beneficial and cheap. According to the new article which published by migration institution (MI), 86 percent of tourist choose museum as a place for visiting just because it is cheaper in compare with other places. The author of paper compared Paris museum, which is the biggest museum of the world and collecting some antiques from all around the world, ticket price with a football match ticket in France. Surprisingly, its ticket cost was just a quarter of match ticket.
In conclusion, this essay proposed three major reasons such as interesting place, learning aspect and financial which have key role in making museum popular for visitors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... a lot of places for tourists to visit. Most of people like to visit ancient place or the plac...
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Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... such as sculptures, paintings, weapons and etc. So visiting museum can be memorable act...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...cal events, culture and art of country. These information can help to compare status of country w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, carpets, guns and variety of painting where was in Tehran. There was a narrato...
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Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...o, Iran's border get closer and it get smaller than before. Last but not less...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'so', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.297587131367 0.229887763892 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.123324396783 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0965147453083 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0321715817694 0.046263068375 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0241286863271 0.0685040099705 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12600536193 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.029490616622 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50676287924 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0241286863271 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0616621983914 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0107238605898 0.0209618222197 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.029490616622 0.0139019557991 212% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1969.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 331.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94864048338 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377643504532 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26586102719 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157099697885 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0906344410876 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50676287924 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607250755287 0.524397521467 116% => OK
Word variations: 70.3504983316 59.2087087015 119% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4705882353 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7228999758 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.823529412 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.644075263715 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 46.0566909543 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.5223880597 1.45489161554 173% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144632031554 0.300154397459 48% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.085395159981 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0764306643637 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.506208006415 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173208243893 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054305457772 0.114077575197 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577353602108 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.211669252862 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0471058472764 0.067059652881 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941803216839 0.210909579961 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681904745687 0.0618886996521 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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