some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. other people prefer to prepare and eat at home. which do you prefer?
There are different attitude about preference of eat in restaurant or eat at home. It seems to me that, eat at home is more desirable. This essay will discuss it in following paragraphs.
First of all, I live in a big home where we are seven. When we eat male at home, we sit around the table and serve food together and have more warm atmosphere and relationship between us. Moreover, we talked about many things and sometimes told funny story. We spent almost an hour for every male in home. In contrast to home, as restaurant is a public place, so there are many different limitation such as time, place where u want to sit and etc.
Furthermore, cooking is one of my favorite hobbies. I have been cooking since 2000 when moved to France. It makes me happy and gives me good feeling. Plus, when the food cooked by myself or someone like my mother, I am sure about its health. The most significant concern about food is material quality and the procedure which used in preparing food. Unfortunately, some restaurants don’t obey the instructions which declare by health ministry which leads to catastrophic tragedy. According to new research publishing by health and medicine science institution (HMSI), last year 2069 people used unhealthy food in restaurants that in fifteen percent it leads to die and rest of them went to hospital and cured finally.
Last but not less, financial aspect is another important reason that I prefer to eat at home instead of eat at restaurant. As restaurants have to pay tax, employee salary, rent and some other expenditures, so they charges people in expensive way. For instance, if I want to make pizza I would spend just 10 dollar per capita, while in restaurant I have to pay eighteen dollar per person. Since I am student and do not have much income, so I like to eat at home.
In conclusion, personally, I prefer to eat at home instead of eat at some public place like restaurant. Three major reasons mentioned above to support my idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: etc.
...such as time, place where u want to sit and etc. Furthermore, cooking is one of my fav...
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Suggestion:
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... health and medicine science institution HMSI , last year 2069 people used unheal...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'charge'
Suggestion: charge
...nt and some other expenditures, so they charges people in expensive way. For instance, ...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...le in restaurant I have to pay eighteen dollar per person. Since I am student and do n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67149585862 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8240301119 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370979680643 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100082233055 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128292894691 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223838304067 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10624531804 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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