The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. DO you agree or disagree with this statement?
The expression of “never, never give up” provide motivation for us to be persist to finish tasks and endure difficulties. In my point of view, this is totally correct expression and I agree with it completely. This essay will support this idea by providing some reasons in following paragraphs.
First of all, to achieve goals we have to endure difficulties and problems. If we give up in facing with issues, we never will not reach to purposes. In other words, we achieve just a few goals easily and without any problems in our life, and most of them are not so impressing or important. One of the most significant merits of does not give up is that other people can trust us and count on us in hard circumstances, which is leads to generating close bonds between us and others. According to the recent researches which was done by London phycology institute (LPI), people who are persist on doing job spite of failure has bight future and in 85 percent of cases they achieve to their goals.
Furthermore, there are a different way to solve problems. Thus, each failure means testing a solution and trying to find another way to solve it. For instance, Tomas Edison (inventor of electricity lamp), to found a way for extracting voice from magnet tried 101 different ways. And after a hundred failure, finally, found the solution. In addition, our self-confidence will be increase by trying several times and avoiding give up. Moreover, if we gave up just because of some failures, we would waste time and money that spent for our previous tries.
In conclusion, I agree with that expression and believe it is the only way for victory and success. I presented some reasons and mentioned advantages of this expression to support my idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 576, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... London phycology institute LPI, people who are persist on doing job spite of failure h...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'persisted'.
Suggestion: persisted
...phycology institute LPI, people who are persist on doing job spite of failure has bight...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8073089701 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7483176607 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6753734606 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277837697082 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791663889446 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093925143951 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169681023754 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106384209659 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.