Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Living in a small town or in a big city both have their advantages and disadvantages. I am of the opinion that living in a big city is a brilliant choice for me. I believe this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the opportunities for finding a job in urban areas is more in contrast to rural areas in which people’s job is limited to some specific works. For example, manufactures and companies tend to stabilize their center in a big city because having more people with different culture and skills is a great benefit that big cities have them and by which companies can grow their business. As a result, the job is available for people who live there. In addition, the diversity of living style demands some job opportunities which is not in a small town. For instance, some activities like concerts are more in major cities because of the high population density musicians and artists prefer to do their activities there which rising the chance of having jobs.
Moreover, high educational services in major cities are more available than the suburbs; many people can find high-quality education facilities easily. Experienced teachers prefer to work at institutes in major cities because of the high demand for qualified teaching. My own experience demonstrates the value of educating in a major city. I had lived for fifteen years in a small town which my parents had lived there, after that my family has moved to a major city because they wanted to give more educational opportunities for me and my brother. My experience as a high school student was completely different from those that I had gained from my hometown. In my new high school, I met different students who came from another city, interacting with them and sharing experiences cause me to learn more about my country and its cultural diversity.
To sum it up, I believe living in a major city is beneficial and I prefer it because more job positions and educational services are available which can improve my lifestyle.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82102272727 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81063270198 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494318181818 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1218515573 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213648338241 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910166260901 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669693146647 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158267083227 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387683004204 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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