Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Living in a small town or in a big city both have their advantages and disadvantages. I am of the opinion that living in a big city outweigh its demerits. I believe this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the opportunities for finding a job in urban areas is more in contrast to rural areas in which people’s job is limited to some specific works. For example, manufactures and companies tend to stabilize their center in a major city because having more people with different culture and skills which is plentiful in major cities is a great benefit by which companies can grow their business. As a result, the job is available for people who live there. In addition, the diversity of living style demands some job opportunities which is not in a small town. For instance, some activities like concerts are more in major cities because of the high population density musicians and artists prefer to do their activities there which can be caused to enhance the chance of having an occupation for citizens.
Moreover, high educational services in major cities are more existing; many people can find high-quality education facilities easily. Experienced teachers prefer to work at institutes in major cities because of the high offer for qualified teaching. My own experience demonstrates the value of educating in a major city. I had lived for fifteen years in a small town which my parents had lived there, after that my family has moved to a major city because they wanted to give more educational opportunities for me and my brother. My experience as a high school student was completely different from those that I had gained from my hometown. In my new high school, I met different students who came from another city, interacting with them and sharing experiences cause me to learn more about my country and its cultural diversity.
To sum it up, taking all aforementioned into account, I believe living in a major city is beneficial and I prefer it because more job positions and educational services are available which can improve the lifestyle. I think in the future, we will have more departure from suburbs to urban; because, cutting-edge technology and modern life demand more people to settle in major cities.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9067357513 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84986339822 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507772020725 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2515060059 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.375 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201131409407 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084418309741 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067137020172 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142676537541 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403289511905 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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