do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
Try to imagine a life without having a car. How would your days be? Would you still be able to get on time for work? Would you still be able to travel wherever you want? Would you be considered not up-to-date? Those are some of the important reasons to have at least a car for an individual nowadays. Usually, a working person will each get a car for those purposes. Do agree that the fact mentioned before is why there are too many cars queuing up on the road. However, I believe that the number of cars in the next twenty years will be fewer in use than there are today due to the public awareness on the pollution and environment, as well as high living cost that causes money to be used for other basic needs but cars.
Public awareness has been rapidly increasing since few years back among the citizens. People in the urban areas usually need to struggle with the problem. The campaigns work by emphasizing how gases emitted by the cars would affect the environment and thus creating pollution. The campaigns on using public transports such as buses, trains and taxis, also provide an alternative to reduce the environmental pollution. Because of that, people choose public transportation services over having a car. The services keep updated days to days to ensure people can use them effectively and to the maximum. Therefore, increasing public awareness among people nowadays is one of the reasons there would be fewer cars in the next twenty years.
Living cost is expected to be very high in the future. People need to manage their financials very well. Therefore, one of the ways is by not putting “to have a car” in the must-need-list but prioritizing the living cost on other basic needs such as food, shelters and maybe life insurances. Due to struggling with the economy, most people choose to not have a car because once one owns a car, the money would not stop flowing only to the car company. Do not forget the cost for maintenance, cost for gas, even cost for the car insurance. Those matter. For that reason, number of cars is expected to decline in the next 20 years.
As conclusion, I believe the number of cars in the next twenty years would be fewer than it is now because of the awareness of taking care of the environment by reducing pollution and high living cost in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll be able to travel wherever you want? Would you be considered not up-to-date? Those...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...be considered not up-to-date? Those are some of the important reasons to have at least a ca...
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Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'days to'.
Suggestion: days to
...having a car. The services keep updated days to days to ensure people can use them effectively ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, at least, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6359223301 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53682000645 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466019417476 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.6182842787 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0434782609 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9130434783 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290241324555 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778141905419 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672488360229 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186322474917 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883882902071 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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