Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Opinions vary widely from person to person, or at different stages of life for any individual, whenever it comes to the topic of whether it’ s better to live in the city. To me, the answer to this question is quite obvious, living in the big city is far more better than living in the countryside. I’ ll cite two reasons to enhance my conclusion.
To begin with, it is no denying the fact that living in the city is much more convenient. Take transportation for example, there’re various means of transportation in the city, such as underground, buses, taxis and so on. On the contrary, some rural areas don’ t even have a road, let alone transportation. In addition, shopping in big city is convenient, too. If you live in some communities that were built on the supermarket, you can just go downstairs to buy your cooking material.
In the second place, in big city, with monitor cameras stalled at everywhere, we citizens’ safety are well secured. Unlike city, countryside regions are not as peace, due to the low average education level. There’re so many cases of rape, rub even collective fight in rural areas. Also, medical situation in villages is not so good, either. Many necessary infrastructures are not accomplished these days in most of our country. For example, my grandpa lives in countryside, I went to visit him when I started my summer vacation last month. I remember a bridge, damage by typhoon, caused a severe traffic jam just in our way. The funny thing is I visited my grandpa before I went to school a month later, the bridge was still broken, this occasion will never happen in a city.
In conclusion, living in the city, in my opinion, is much more convenient, safer and more effective.
I am very content with the life in the big city.Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... obvious, living in the big city is far more better than living in the countryside. I'...
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Line 8, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...y content with the life in the big city.Some people prefer to live in a small town. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74202898551 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84897605576 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605797101449 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9594127466 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9047619048 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.19047619048 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420204519143 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131687603238 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174170303115 0.0737576698707 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266232431002 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.287689079775 0.0645574589148 446% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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