Although people have different choice some prefer to have one or two friends while others prefer larger number of friends. Choosing friends have many circumstances like depending upon nature of persons and our needs. I personally prefer to have any friends in my life.There are number of advantages of both few friends pr large number of friends. MY evaluations is based on following reasons.
The first advantage to have one or two friends we can understand each other in short amount of time, friendship based on mutual interest which developed when we understand each others and respect each other. When we have few friends i can manage and devote my time with them we can spend lot of time each other, which is greatly helps in development of deep understanding. If we know the person who is more trust worthy and have mutual understanding we can shear our problems and some kind of secret with him or her without any doubt. We human dependent on each others in life for many things, I believe that friends are only relation we choose in life, we always want to have someone understand and and respect our emotions so with few friend we can developed our stronger and long lasting relations along with mutual understanding.
Moreover, there are many benefits of larger no of friends for example we learn more from them, for instance, every person have different level of knowledge friends are only person who we talk more than else because we spend lots of time with each others, also many friends we learn about the different field of life such as politics, engineering, science. Having broad knowledge helps us to gain success in life which makes unique among others due to knowledge. For example one of my friend Jon who has many friends he learned many language from his friends like Spanish, French, German. all this is because of his friends they belongs to different countries he learn such valuable language when he was in university which makes unique among others when he speaks with different people of others countries in their own language. Making many friends provides us a opportunity to learn more about the different field of life.
By comparing the both advantages of few friends such as one or two with large no of friends I believes that both have their own merits but personally I prefer to have large no of friends. because large no of friends enable us to learn such a valuable things from different prospective of life which makes us more prominent among others and more successful in life.
By way of conclusion, although the advantages of small no of friends is not deniable but, after careful evaluation I firmly believes that advantages of large no of friends in life is more effective for successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in short, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82415254237 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5557618843 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423728813559 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1960426988 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.3125 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20411935146 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845662052338 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764164440572 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12621940346 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531830748619 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.