some people prefer to take courses over the internet. what are advantages of such courses?
The world is advancing at a fast rate which means that a lot of things get altered about our life .studying is not an exception. Now it is widespread to take diverse kinds of courses over the internet which are called online courses.it gives some people immense number of opportunities and has its own advantages especially for people who are overloaded with work ,children ,household chores and so on.
to start the exploration of the arguments in favor of the above mentioned view it has to be stated that taking online courses may be very beneficial for us. People may work and study simultaneously. there is no need to be absent from work because of studies they may study the whole course staying in their office. consequently people may be able to support their family with the help of their work and also be able to have variety of opportunities for the future related to their job.
to further argue in favor of this view we need to realize that that by taking online course we may save our time too. sometimes universities or colleges are far from our houses and it takes two or more hours to get there. online courses give us opportunities to study from our home to savfe time for our children or parents .there is no need to ride and stay at traffic especially during the pick hours.
ultimately ,whenever we talk about this issue one distinct argument that is worth to be highlighted is that by taking online courses we may savfe money too. some online classes are cheaper than to go to the universities. people may save immense amount of money when they are taking five, six or more classes at the same time.one more important thing that is related to saving money is that that there is no need to pay for fuel as well.
referring to the to the already mentioned views it is no real challenge to sum up that taking online courses may be very beneficial and useful for us. the only thing that we need to do is to abandon from our daily issues for an hour and to concentrate on our classes. we need to be attentive and put our srtentgh and power to our classes in order to have a profitable job for the future and irrespective of where we are at the home ,work or at our universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, well, as to, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48387096774 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52985182135 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466501240695 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5058895652 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.466666667 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8666666667 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183035669975 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717957439603 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670879254254 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118123500146 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571467018533 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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