Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Education is the key to the success of students in the future world. To have a good education it is important to learn theories as well as practical skills. personally, I believe that colleges and universities should spend time developing practical aspects of a student while giving theoretical knowledge. it is my firm belief that spends time on practical skills is important for several reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, when we are professionals after graduation we need to communicate with others and our success in our career is dependent on our presenting and demonstrating abilities. without proper communication skills, we cannot explain our idea or we cannot debate against our opinions to the community. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. As an undergraduate, we use to practice our presentation skills with the project evaluations. Though our university spent more time on teaching theories, when I go to the industry, I realized that the small-time spent on presentations are more important than theories. Since even our idea is the best out of all it is not worth if we cannot demonstrate to society. For this reason, I feel that the education system should spend more time on developing practical skills that teaching just theories.
Secondly, professions like engineers, doctors need more time on practical scenarios while learning facts. if an engineer learns facts without having any practical knowledge, how can he develop that idea to well being of the society? In this case, an engineer's development would be not suitable or it might fail in the middle of the constructions. For instance, my friend Nimal is an engineer from a private university and he worked as a site engineer of a highway construction site. However, he is not able to build the bridge with required standards and therefore while construction is taking place one side of the bridge was falling. In my point of view, this cause happens due to the lack of experience on the practical side, and therefore universities should spend more time teaching those skills to students.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is important to have more time on teaching practical skills rather than use all the time to learn facts. this is because practical skills helped to success in our career and it will reduce the failures in development in a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05623471883 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97994965588 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488997555012 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6327545443 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.842105263 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139813753502 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508684390703 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505758761284 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101867980121 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272253970914 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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