Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The invention of computer is very important for everyone's life. In today's time, from six year old child to sixty years old man, computer is very necessary thing in people's life. There are two types of people, one that believe computers make life complex and stressful and other believe that it actually made easier and convenient. In my opinion, computers have made life easier and more convenient.
Firstly, computer has more advantages likes connecting to the world. Facilities like electronic mail has make life simpler and faster. We can send mails to anyone within second. Communication with other becomes more easy, quickly and with less costly. Now days, computers with webcam facilities will help to talk with people around the world and we can see them and they also see us. It is as we are with them. For example, when my father was out of country for their business work, we can see them and talk with them whenever we want with the use of computers. It helps us to connect with each other. So, use of computers is help to connect with others easily.
Secondly, using computers we can know about everything that happening in other country. We can see any country's news, learn other languages as well as cultures. Now days, all students learn their subject on computers. There are lot's of tutorials available and easily accessible. For example, I learn more about my computer science subject courses that are not include in my courses in college and it helps me to enhance my knowledge. Sometimes, I cannot ask my professor about silly problems and doubts and computer gives me all types of practical knowledge that helps me to clear difficulties. So, use of computers are convenient as well as make our life easier.
Finally, there are many new researches are going on to enhance use of computers and it is very helpful for everyone to use computers very effectively. We can use computers for make sheets of our accounts that how much money we spend and how much we have left. We can save our memories of photos and videos to computer where it is always safe and we can see any time we want. Using computer we can play games and see movies which is very efficient use of computer as it serves a purpose of entertainment. Thus obviously, computer have made life easier and more convenient.
In conclusion, we have seen that there are many advantage of computer and there is research is going on to make life more simpler. Also, it serves purpose of entertainment as well as keeping our memories and helping to save useful data. I believe that computer have made our life more easier and convenient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: CD_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
...life. In todays time, from six year old child to sixty years old man, computer is ver...
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
...er science subject courses that are not include in my courses in college and it helps m...
Line 7, column 505, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...s it serves a purpose of entertainment. Thus obviously, computer have made life easi...
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: MANY_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...conclusion, we have seen that there are many advantage of computer and there is research is go...
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
...re is research is going on to make life more simpler. Also, it serves purpose of entertainme...
Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
...elieve that computer have made our life more easier and convenient.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75219298246 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53802927592 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449561403509 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0617479519 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3928571429 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302741635934 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115912185025 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131870970768 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222565977235 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105916816332 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.