Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Benefits and drawbacks of internet has been a controversial issue in the community and among people lately . Some people claim that internet has valuable information to use people. Encounters of internet assert that internet has some risky reasons and results. Although both sides have several pros and cons, Internet has undeniable benefits in the modern world. I am of the opinion that internet provide numerous information to learn people. I will elucidate the details of my support with some tangible details and examples in the following paragraphs.
In the modern society internet is the part of people that include many reason. People allow to reach knowledge easily thanks to internet. İt is not found a hinder so that people can not investigate or examine about knowledge. Old times government can block reaching to knowledge. People could not read books, magazine or articles. But, people read all things via internet today.
On the other hand, Internet opens new era for humans who are connect regularly from different parts of world. People have internet connection during twenty four hours in seven days. Moreover, it provides lower meeting costs than other devices. For example, a professor from MIT can give a lesson for many students thanks to internet broadcasting.
Lastly, internet means freedom among countless people. They want freedom, justice and fair law system from national government. In order to hinder this struggle, government try to sign off some publishes. But internet has limitless power about connection and publish. People can learn their rights from birth, because they are universal human rights. For instance, many country have different government style. People prefer to choose own government style in order to live higher life standards. Because, they reach many information regarding other countries from internet.
To sum up, internet has several advantages. But this not means people always choose true one. Thanks to internet people have fast learning grade, people evolving to think fast. More than past century people's knowledge level have doubled. In the possible future people connect internet temporally. İt will be a part of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in the community and among people lately . Some people claim that internet has val...
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Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...t provide numerous information to learn people. I will elucidate the details of my sup...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...rnet is the part of people that include many reason. People allow to reach knowledge easily...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reaching
... that include many reason. People allow to reach knowledge easily thanks to internet. İt...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...hand, Internet opens new era for humans who are connect regularly from different parts ...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'connected'.
Suggestion: connected
...ternet opens new era for humans who are connect regularly from different parts of world...
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Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
... People have internet connection during twenty four hours in seven days. Moreover, it provi...
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Line 13, column 436, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
...vernment style. People prefer to choose own government style in order to live highe...
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Line 13, column 497, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in order to live higher life standards. Because, they reach many information regarding ...
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Line 13, column 517, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...her life standards. Because, they reach many information regarding other countries f...
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Line 13, column 517, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...her life standards. Because, they reach many information regarding other countries from internet...
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Line 17, column 85, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to true'
Suggestion: to true
...But this not means people always choose true one. Thanks to internet people have fas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40697674419 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55109351746 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6690590013 48.9658058833 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.0 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4666666667 20.6045352989 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.23333333333 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266618121786 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748202062705 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595304599443 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157736131197 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636572320334 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.91 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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