Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In our contemporary world, the communication and information flourished by the expansion of world wide web, the internet. internet allows us to access diverse informations which could contains helpful materials or harmful ones. The question which factor in is that having high access to internet is devastating or not. In my opinion, internet have much higher benefits relative to its harms, moreover, I will describe my opinion by three reasons in the following essay.

The first and most important reason is that internet make comminucation a lot easier tah before. Decades ago, comminucating between different cities of a country was agitating and bothersome. However, nowadays you can contact to a person in another country, on the other side of the world in fraction of a second by clicking a simple button.Furthermore, there are several application which are developed according to this purpose. these programs can be Youtube, facebook, Instagram and etc. The main purpose of these kind of application and policy of their organization is to make people around the world closer together.

The another reason can be extremely impactful for the growth of knowledge and science in the world. Recently, different companies like facebook and google have developed different algorithms for accumulating divese information of their users and utilize them in diffrent subjects in order to enhancing. In the other hand, the process of learning and online courses are become very prominent and eliminate the frustration of learning different thing in various institutes also it reduces the expenses.

The final reason which makes internet more advantagous than harmful is due to the users. users are the people who decide to use internet appropriately or not. there are abundant websites that teach you how to misuse the internet and access to the private informations of the other uses or there are profuse websites which invite you to do unethical things. it is all based on the user. Therefore, it is the user who manages how to utilize internet and keep himself to not going after the unethical matters.

In a nutshell, I want to summarize that internet provides us many abilities which is based on our self to utilize them, the good abilities like publishing our knowledge and comminucating with eclatic people and diverse cultures or misuse the in unethical and inapropriate subjects.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Internet
...ansion of world wide web, the internet. internet allows us to access diverse information...
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...access diverse informations which could contains helpful materials or harmful ones. The ...
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...t to a person in another country, on the other side of the world in fraction of a...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...of a second by clicking a simple button.Furthermore, there are several application which ar...
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Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun application seems to be countable; consider using: 'several applications'.
Suggestion: several applications
... a simple button.Furthermore, there are several application which are developed according to this p...
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Suggestion: These
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Suggestion: It
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...h eclatic people and diverse cultures or misuse the in unethical and inapropriate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31331592689 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94314134919 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543080939948 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2177975028 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.055555556 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227143655592 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629433757056 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524336091142 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114296875744 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535329341565 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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