Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
friendship is one of crucial things which can be the reason of happiness and sadness in our life. Hence, one question always come to our mind, which is about what kind of friendship can make us more cheerful. friendships which are founded for a long time with the small number of groups are increedibly important for happiness. I will explain my opinion in the following essay by details.
To the begining, old friends can be far more better than new friends due to one main reason. this reason can be intrepreted by the long period of time. time make friendships potent and strong because of comprehension of each other. old friends know their weakness points which they try to conceal . also, they know their strengths which they tend to advocate. Furthermore, they become familiar with each other and share their secrets. Additionally, they spend so much time together which can be embarrassing and funny. however, destiniy can'y be always fair and equal, which can have some risings and fallings. Maybe due to this matter, they break up and isolated from each other but afterward they group up again and be the friends they used to be. old friends always support you in any situation and avoid you from making bad decisions. they can be exemplified like a mirror which reflect your attribute.
Finally, creating new friendship and knowing new people is not a bad thing but it do not end up with pure happiness. friendship with a lot of people can cause to have sociable trait. Still, you don't have enough time to spend your time with them which can end in knowing their personality very well. Moreover, you can not have fun with them like your old friends. For some other reasons, new friends can be based on gaining some opportunities and profits from distinct person which is not a good way for making ecstacy out of friendship. Besides, they can pretend to be good friends to you which will leave you alone in harsh moment of your life that ends up in complete disappointment.
In a nutshell, friendship is completely integral for having a happy, supportive life. however, choosing a good friend is also an important matter which should be considered deeply. I am of the opinion that old friends are very better at making you happy than some new friends. it is all because of the time. time is a keypoint for knowing people very well and spend a good time with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75961538462 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52859703062 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485576923077 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7429695624 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1538461538 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255792810758 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853511004857 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641600513551 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189735307314 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399608096316 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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