Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think acess to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specfic reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is a fact in the past few years, the internet has exploded in terms of size, amount of information, and accessibility.
The usage of the internet encompasses every aspect of day-to-day life with a few examples being Shopping, News, Weather, Live Webcasts and much more. People who used to rely on traditional sources of information like the Radio, Television, Newspapers are now increasingly flocking to the internet or the “Web” as its popularly called.
As more and more people get on the Web, it becomes increasing;ly effective for companies to use the web to reach out for the consumers. This also apes for Advertisers, Marketers, Content Providers, Newsmakers etc to adopt the same strategies. All the information is now available online and when it all adds up there is a wealth of information that is now available whoever seeks to find them. So, I strongly agree with the view that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information much more than what is actually necessary.
Now, providing too much information can also prove to be counter-productive. How does a consumer pick the right information, when there is so much available online? How does he filter to get the data that he needs? Is there a chance that the data he needs have buried somewhere in the middle ? It is highly probable or let me say, this was the case a few years back. So, technically, people were correct when they said too much information also created problems.
Fortunately, Technology finds ways to make it easier to use an innovation over a period of time. In the last few years, internet search engines have been getting smarter everyday. They enable a user to enter a search string and then it searches the internet for the most relevant and appropriate data and presents them to the user, with the results listed in the order of importance.. They also offer the user several options to further filter the provided results, making it easier to zone on the correct data.
In summary, while it is true that there is a lot of not very valuable information on the web which may be counter-productive for the users, there are also means to effectively seek and find the appropriate information, thus providing a great deal of value to people who are looking to learn about a subject, buy the best product for their needs, or any one of many other activities that people need to do nowadays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 83, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e it easier to use an innovation over a period of time. In the last few years, internet search...
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Line 17, column 172, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...earch engines have been getting smarter everyday. They enable a user to enter a search s...
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Line 17, column 384, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...esults listed in the order of importance.. They also offer the user several option...
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Line 21, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... deal of value to people who are looking to learn about a subject, buy the best p...
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Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat people need to do nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, may, so, then, thus, while, in summary, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92753623188 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94184796413 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7557420821 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291510302512 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797806478437 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949834904731 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131701580365 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575099624952 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.