Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this day and age, with the growing speed of innovation and development of technology, the Internet has become an indispensable part of our daily lives. Many people claim that it brings more harm than good to us. Nevertheless, I believe that its benefits far outweigh its drawbacks. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraph.
First of all, it is a fantastic tool for everyone to look up information. The Internet is capable of providing us with a massive amount of data within only a short time. For instance, Whenever I encounter a problem while working on my school assignments, I just need to type in some keywords and thousands of results will appear in a few seconds, which is extremely convenient and helpful. That is not to mention, I can download materials for free. With the assistance of this network, I can study more effectively and have no difficulty finishing my homework. Moreover, the internet also broadens my horizon and helps me enhance my knowledge and skills. I learned to view problems from different perspectives and come up with more diverse and creative solutions, which is beneficial to me in the long run.
Second of all, it is also a great source of entertainment. Nowadays, with the Internet, we can get access to almost every kind of entertainment without having to travel anywhere. For example, my family usually goes on a picnic in the park every weekend. However, when the weather conditions are bad, we have no other choice but to stay at home. But staying indoors does not mean there is nothing to do to have fun. We can watch movies, listen to our favorite songs, or play games with each other, all through using the internet, which is both relaxing and enjoyable. This brings our family members much closer together. That is the reason why I find the Internet so interesting and useful.
In conclusion, the Internet has a positive impact on our lives, for it is not only a great searching tool but also a wonderful source of entertainment for everyone.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78186968839 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81163149965 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592067988669 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2656469511 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177463803932 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458566090492 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409866363381 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896507328362 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462333780251 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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