Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Internet is one of the most important inventions of modern science. No one can deny that there are both advantages and disadvantages of using the internet in our life. However, If I were mandatory to choose between the opportunities or drawbacks for using the internet, I would strongly agree with the first statement and I feel this way for two reasons which I will endeavor to explain in the following essay.
To begin with, the internet has become a plausible source of information to solve any kind of educational problems. For example, when I was a student at Michigan State University, I was not good at research activities and also the lectures of the professors were abstruse to me. Then, I have decided to take help from the internet to solve this type of problems as it was too reliable. Before attending the class, I would search for the topic of the lecture on Google by using the internet to get a lucid explanation. It was fascinating that I was able to get profound knowledge within seconds of that lecture. It also helped me to do research activities because I got a plentiful number of articles on the website related to my research topic.
Secondly, the internet provides important information and it's really superb for human life. For instance, once I was in alone in my room because my parents were in my village to meet my grandparents. I was not good at cooking and it was pathetic for me. But, fortunately, I got an impressive idea from YouTube. I have figured out an exceptional channel on the website and it was related to cooking. I followed the information from that website to cook food and I was able to prepare my meal without taking any help from others.
Thirdly, the internet also provides us a great opportunity to share our feelings and communicate with others within seconds. For precedent, we can share our feelings in social media like Face book to get help from others. We are also able to communicate with others in a cost-efficient way through what's app, messenger's voice call. It's easy to send any document or contact with university's professors through email.
Finally, taking everything mentioned above into account, I firmly conclude the using the internet is more favorable. This is because you feel smarter and able to know news throughout the world within seconds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.855 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80904676892 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5175 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2288477314 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4761904762 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0476190476 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134111733036 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424368310049 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447075276477 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800179716942 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361985330104 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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