Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Other think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Internet is quite common these days. People across globe are using this technology for good things as well as bad things. Some people think that access to internet provide better knowledge and information, while other people think that access to this much of information can lead to problems. Well I personally believe that internet is good for people across the globe, because of its advantages.
First, Internet helps us to gain knowledge about almost all the topic very quickly. It is full of quality resources. If you want to learn something new, you just need an internet connection and a personal computer or now-a-days a mobile phone is enough to get connected to the internet. Once you are connected, you can access to any course whether it is about medicine or about some kind of agricultural activity, it will serves the demand very quickly without any waiting time. So in this way, it helps a lot of people with the curious mind to provide them with the valuable knowledge.
Second, apart from the information, It is also a great source of entertainment. Whenever we feel like, we are getting bored, we can just google something and spend some of our free time watching some great movies or television series. Like on my weekends, when I don't have anything to do, I just get connected to internet and search for some good movies and just watch them happily.
Third, internet has made so many services easily accessible and online. Like if I want to know what is going to be happen in my city or something like what government fascilities are available online for me, I can easily access online without going to the offices. In some cities government launches many schemes, which become difficult to keep a track and to find out about them is not easy. But consider when we have internet, we can just find them and sort them according to out needs.
Apart from government services, Banking is getting more digital these days, and it is only possible because of the internet. So let's say one of my friend is in some different city and he is great need of some money, so I can easily help him with the help of internet by sending money quickly just in few clicks. Even with the online banking, we don't need to go to bank to check our balance or get a slip, we can easily download it with the help of internet.
So, summarizing all these points, we can see how the internet has played a major role in providing us with information, services and great entertainment services. These all things make the internet one of the best technology for our generation. And therefor I believe, internet is providing the world with bulk of valuable information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'serve'
Suggestion: serve
... kind of agricultural activity, it will serves the demand very quickly without any wai...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ion series. Like on my weekends, when I dont have anything to do, I just get connect...
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Line 13, column 274, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...e without going to the offices. In some cities government launches many schemes, which...
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Line 17, column 129, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Line 17, column 346, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...licks. Even with the online banking, we dont need to go to bank to check our balance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, well, while, apart from, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7264957265 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56815562858 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485042735043 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1291526 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338833407468 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983487985924 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105127311163 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171352722187 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836582070027 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.