Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
Adulthood is one of the greatest time to take important decision in life. Some time thier decisions can greatly help them to live a good life but some time it does not. We can see around us, how some young people want to live an independence life away from their parents, but some other portion of young adults just love to live with their parents. Well If i have to choose I will definately go with the living with my parents option.
First, getting adult does not meen, we become mature and we can do all the stuffs by ourselves. There are many things in our life, which we can't do alone, we need somebody's help and parents play a major role in this case. For example, if I am doing some startup bussiness or some kind of activity which requires a lot of time and efforts, and I am not able to focus on my day to day routine, then in that case mother plays a major role. She cares about my diet and my laundry things and all the things which she can do to assist me. So in this way, she is actually helping in my bussiness to grow by being supportive all the time.
Second, Whenerver we feel that, we are suffering with some mental strss or health problem, they are the first who cares about us the most. Some time bad things happen in our life, and at that time, we may not be able to handle it emotionally or physically. Then our parents comes in to the picture to help us there. They provide motivation and supports to heal out from the situation rapidly. But if you imagine about someone who is trying to cope with this situation alone, think how difficult it will be for him. Some time people commit suicide under such kind of mental pressure.
Third and according to me, the most important out of all other is the financial supports they provide, whenever we need for our basic needs and other purposes. Parent never let thier children in bad condition especially when he/she is suffering with the financial problems. If you are living under the same roof, they will do whatever possible for them to keep you happy and will always help you with their financial support.
So, concluding my points, parents do everything from a to z for thier children, no matter how old is he or she. They provide them with shelter, food, clothing and financial assistance whenever one needs. They don't only help in materialistic way, they also provide love and care and some time help us to heal in out bad time. So I will definately prefer to live with my parents over living an independence life away from my parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e are many things in our life, which we cant do alone, we need somebodys help and pa...
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Line 17, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ial assistance whenever one needs. They dont only help in materialistic way, they al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, third, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44301075269 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29574903624 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481720430108 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7491215389 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1363636364 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307014915813 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858613032839 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727033066913 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178469472493 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768047883315 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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