Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing Computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Computer games are going popular now-a-days. It is the most popular among the children. But is this just waste of time of the children, who spends a lot of time playing these video games? Well, according to me, yes, it is totally waste of the children.
First, Computer games are time consuming snd addictive. So, generally most of the children spend thier major portion of time playing these games and as a result they are left with very less time for learnig and development activities. For example my little brother, who is in class 5, has got the habbit of playing video games for a long time before sleeping in the night. As a result he sleeps in the class, and many of time teachers complain about his habbit. So, this has definately decreased his performance in class, and now he is suffering with grades.
Second, Long hours of playing video games deteriots the vision and eyesight in the young age children. Doctors have reported this problem with many cases where video games were the villain for the damage of the eyesights. Children, now-a-days are getting myopia at a very young age. This was not the same some 20 years ago. At that time children loved to play outdoor games and that actually helped those kids to have better eyesight. But thses days, kids don't like to go outside and play outdoor games, in contrast they spend those time playing video games.
Third, This has also impacted the mental growth of children. Some psychologists suggested that these children have become more dangerous and they are prone to adopt all negative things from the society like drugs and other criminal activities. Also, video game has decresed thier sensitivity, Now,they don't fear to kill or harm any one. That's why there has been reported attacks have been observed in many school across the world.
So in conclusion, Video games have created severe impacts on the health and the growth of children. These have made them dump, weak eyesighted, and less sensitive to the other people. And I believe we need to bring some changes in our system to stop such growing market of video games. And there should be proper restriction while accessing video games by these chiledren.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, second, so, third, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84840425532 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33586202817 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550531914894 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0450091539 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2608695652 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281822646897 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847461706532 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685306947369 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164077684944 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812626373328 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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