Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move several times through their lives looking for a better job, house, community or even climate. Which one do you prefer?
Everyone like change and humans are natured to change their surroundings often. Few people make larger changes like changing the city, state or country while others make smaller changes like changing the interior or apartments. Job opportunities is mostly the prime reason for such changes. I prefer to change places for the better opportunities and I will elaborate my reasons in ensuing paragraphs.
First, in order to get a better opportunity, one should be open to travel in different places. Many times, doing the same jobs for years decreases the job satisfaction and to avoid that changing job is necessary. Especially if job is away from your region then it adds more value and experience in one’s career. In the highly competitive job markets, people require working with various companies to get multiple skill to exceed others. For example, a sales manager cannot be successful in his profession unless he learns convincing communication skills to sell the product.
Secondly, if people travel to another place, they can know value of their field. For example, I earned degree in physical therapy from India. While I was deciding to change the place to gain experience, I gathered information on better job prospects in abroad and choose USA as my degree is very valuable here. However, there are many reasons for people to travel different places. Nowadays, people are moving to explore the world and different cultures. Sometimes, people change their place because of the economic reasons. For example, in the USA there are few states where cost of living is high compare to others. California is one such state. So, people who have limited source of income have to change the state.
Let’s put in a nutshell, change is better in every way. It gives us better career, happiness and satisfaction of living life. I believe one should always change their environment to gain more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to convince'.
Suggestion: to convince
...sful in his profession unless he learns convincing communication skills to sell the produc...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08945686901 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67321469774 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.149698254 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8571428571 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9047619048 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23991520577 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747669365546 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354602348095 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148372207629 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038399791252 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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