Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In technical era, traveling became feasible for every person. Nowadays people like to visit museums when they visit new places because it provides knowledge and enjoyment at the same time. There are more reasons which I will explain in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, to know any country better, museum provides a platform to know the history of that country. It also informs us about beliefs, morality, and culture of that place. For example, most of the people must have heard a name “Gandhi” once in their lifetime but many few had a chance to visit his museum located in Ahmedabad, India. This museum educates about his lifestyle and his life journey starting from his childhood till he receives freedom for his mother nation “India”. Museums are a lot more than just the artifacts. It provides you a platform to discuss thoughts and opinions and become an active part of that community.
Secondly, museums are not only attracting but also educating the society. Museum exhibits knowledge related to an area of study, item, time-period or an idea. Many people visit museum for educational purposes. Various type of museums represents various themes such as, general science, arts, science and technology, and many more. For example, there is a huge space science museum of NASA situated near Houston. This museum has rockets and spaceships on display. Students of the various age group find it very interesting and educational. Also, people having background in aeronautical science find this center much more interesting. Nowadays, museums became very stimulating because they have a hands-on system in most of the museum. Just touch the screen and recorded message teaches you about the parts of the museum. Some museums provide individual audio devices with detailed information.
Let’s put in a nutshell, people like to visit museum because it is about us. It reflects our creation, our dreams and our values. Museums make the world more enlightened place for present and future generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun few seems to be countable; consider using: 'many '.
Suggestion: many
...Gandhi' once in their lifetime but many few had a chance to visit his museum locate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26234567901 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7659194759 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2400305459 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1304347826 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78260869565 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30399156386 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896966947319 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866315431815 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199086714206 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605147547106 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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