Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, which idea do you agree with?
In recent years parenting became one of the hot topics in society. Some people think that parents should provide children with all possible opportunities. Others think that parents should give children more freedom from an early age. I believe that parents should help children to plan their spare time. I will explore the reasons for that in the following essay.
First of all, childhood is the most significant period in a person’s life, when we create the foundation of our personality. Consequently, these years will define the whole direction of our future life. Therefore, everyone should take the best of it. I think that parents can provide significant support in the social and emotional development of their children. It is not a secret that when we are young, we do not understand what is beneficial for us. It is true that children and young people are often suffered from different addictions, and this behavior can lead to some problems with health or study. But with the help of responsible parents, they can find a variety of interesting occupations. For example, one of my cousins spent all his free time playing computer games, and his parents did not show any concern about that. At the end of the year, he failed his exam and had to stay for another year at school. But if his parents had helped him to find a more productive and convenient hobby, he would have passed the exam.
Secondly, parents can help their children to reach their potential and find their true passion. Children do not have a rich life experience, they are judging the world considering the information that parents have given them. I strongly believe that presenting the children with all possible opportunities parents would provide them with a bright and interesting future. For example, when I was a child parents brought me to volleyball classes, acting classes, and theatre studio. I think this helps me a lot in defying my real preferences. As an adult person, I can not blame my parents that they did not give me a chance to try myself in different areas, because I have tried nearly everything when I was a child. So, now I do not have a feeling that I miss something when I was a child.
To sum up, I think that parents should help children to plan their free time. First of all, this helps children to avoid some addictions and bad habits. And secondly, this helps children to try everything and explore their abilities in order to find their real passion in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77674418605 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61606304018 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483720930233 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7899606794 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.16 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353708172164 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110099700939 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119550079098 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265295758276 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1054525836 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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