Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave. Do you agree or disagree? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
In the modern world, cinema has become one of the most popular cultural activities. It is for us what the theatre was for ancient Greeks, or what the literature was for people in the age of Shakespeare. I strongly believe that movies and television can significantly affect the way people behave and the way they perceive the world. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, I think that cinema and television can be great psychological tools, bringing so much inspiration and relief to our life. For example, if you suffer from some family problems, or if you have a severe break-up with your partner, It is always wonderful to watch a movie that will remind you that it is not the end of the world. Movies can provide a great example of ordinary people who struggle with problems in their life and manage to develop strength in order to build a successful future.
Moreover, I think that movies and television can be useful not only for individuals, but they can also help society as a whole. I adhere to the opinion that documentary movies and tv programs can contribute to providing more tolerance in society by raising awareness of different topics. For example, this year «Pixar» company produced their first movie with a black lead character. So, this way they will help establish this simple idea that black people are a natural part of our society. It is hard to believe but that idea was not so obvious for our ancestors. I think that cinema can play a significant role in changing society in a positive way by building critical thinking and opening up people’s minds. But if cinema provides some conservative and old-fashioned ideas the society will easily adopt them as well.
In conclusion, I believe that cinema and television can affect our lives in both positive and negative ways. It is a very powerful tool to influence society, and individuals as well. Cinema can change the way we see the world by inspiring us to embrace some new values or by presenting us with some new angles of familiar things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, mind you, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74104683196 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65555593501 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517906336088 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0722437796 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181332847959 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582451102656 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624252443485 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11189252532 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428810863826 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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