Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have a good relationship because we can communicate with them more often. What do you think?
In today's fast-changing world, there is no denying the fact that having a relationship with others plays a pivotal role in so many aspects throughout one's lifetime. In this regard, there are the numbers of people who try to be away from people and improve the relationship by reminding their virtues. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of having a face to face relationship substantially outweigh those of the other one for quite a few reasons, two monumental of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first exquisite reason coming to mind is that the personality of the people will not be recognized without speaking face to face with them inasmuch as by speaking and sharing the idea of a variety of subjects the thinking of each person can be revealed. To be more specific, in my personal experience, two years ago when I attended university we have a classmate whom that I did not be aware of his personality because he was shy and besides, did not participate in any groups namely, theater, sports, etc. however, I have heard from somebody that he is a great person, after some days when I spoke with him I realized that he does not have a strong personality.
Last but not the least, in some face to face relationship some beneficial future work can be held. In addition, working as a team need to have some face to face meeting. Although, since the dawn of the internet, people can use the one for participating in a meeting, in that situation all matters cannot be considered. To illustrate this subject, one of my best friend whom I have known for 5 years is one of the members of a big company in my country advised me by saying his experience. He stated that try to make a team with the members who are the most sought-after in sharing idea and also he said that you must not be shy and also be aware of this matter that the best relationship is the one which is face to face.
To sum up, even though there are the numbers of people who subscribe the opposing view of mine but the crucial mentioned reasons may make them change their opinion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53066666667 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7137837464 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1351873933 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.583333333 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228543972582 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853732147367 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593852530577 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127479176417 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774068672111 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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