It is a common saying that First impression is the best impression. Some people make there views and opinion about people instantly after meeting them for the very first time. Other, take time to analyze the person based on his or her capabilities and then arrive at an opinion based on them.
First impression are mostly based on instinct. Nowadays most of the job interviews are conducted based on first impressions. A person who has been able to influence the people conducting the interview is able to secure the job. My cousin is who is a computer scientist has excellent academic records. But during her first interview with a reputed international software company, she failed to impresses the employers. One of the interviewer even commented that he felt that my cousin was rude. She was very disappointed and realized the importance of making the First impression. One more example is the love at first sight seen in teenagers and youngsters. Most of the feeling are infatuations developed are based on the appearance at the first look. Such feelings, however,do not last long.
When i was recruited as a dental officer in a rural area in India, I had a unique experience with my supervisor. he came across as a very strict person and i instantly developed a hatred for him. Later, i realized that my impression about him was wrong and he was strict because he was concerned about the safety of his colleagues since the area was prone to occasional attacks by anti social elements and terrorists.
In my opinion, First impressions are mostly based on emotional response and less on intellectual judgement. Scientific evidence has proven the fact that first impressions are generally based on false assumptions and hence in most of the cases they are generally wrong. One should not be hasty in making opinion about other people. I strongly believe in this principle and try to follow the same while make decisions or choices in my own life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, so, then, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93072289157 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78166360599 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.398318492 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.85 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216391791632 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650555820059 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505592976358 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133687700701 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412076804066 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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