Some young adults want independence from their parent as soon as possible. Other young adult prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situation do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of taking a decision at such young
age of either staying independent or with the families but if i were forced to choose anyone of these i
would definitely choose to live independent and live my life as the way i want. It is my firm believe that
staying independent is not a decision against your parents but it is helping you ultimately to groom and
give you the lessons of life. As a mother bird always pushes its young children off the cliff to help them
learn how to fly, its not because she wants to kill them but she is teaching them the reality of living and
being independent and that’s why i choose to be independent and i will develop my reasons in the
following paragraphs.
To begin with, i feel getting the independence you want at a young age will help you feel and sense the burden of responsibilities which you have to go through in your daily life. I have to admit that my
opinion on this matter has been influenced by my own personal experience. You see i had one of my
college friend who stays as a paying guest and she is a student just like me, I knew she always use to
come late to the classes and every time she used to have a new reason but when i once went to her
place i saw the real efforts she was doing to live a normal life that i was living but i never felt so much of pressurized because i had my family and maids to do all the work. She had a time table not for studying but for dividing and performing all her task from cooking food to washing her clothes this way although she was an average student but she very well excelled in the exam of living life independently.
Secondly i feel at this young age getting independence from parents is fun and you can live the way you want. Drawing from my own personal experience when i was in my 10th grade i very well remember that my parents had to go out for a week for some work and i was home alone for seven days and i really enjoyed that time being alone because there was no restrictions, nobody was there to scold me i could make and eat anything, I had the opportunity to call upon my friends and play for hours and hours and i also had the time to watch movies till late night and i could sleep and wake up at any time. It’s certainly clear to see why i choose upon living independently from parents when i was a young adult.
In light the above mentioned reasons, i strongly believe that sometimes getting independence from
parents at a young age also helps you have that fun time where you can refresh your mind and at the
same time teaches you to continue living with all the responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31115459883 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48267575561 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463796477495 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.1344086022 228% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.716103772 48.9658058833 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.272727273 100.406767564 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.4545454545 20.6045352989 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.53405017921 375% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261866277122 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121890666169 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576960720468 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824535666744 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485739959767 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 11.7677419355 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.71 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.61 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.0537634409 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.