Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
Whenever it comes to the issue that whether living with my parents or live by myself, there are never short of discussions and arguments. Although living independently sounds appealing to some extent, because showing adulthood must have ability, as far as I am concerned, I would still prefer living with my parents. Even though there stand hundreds of reason behind my preference, I would only explore some of them here.
First of my reasoning would be that most people who lives alone struggle with house work such as cleaning, shopping for food, paying bills but if we live with my family I would not need to worry about those things. For instance one of my friends named Sally lives alone for only 6 months the reason why she only live 6 months is that she paid almost 2/3 on her house rent which takes most of her salary. This example showing that living with family is advantage of lots of things such as finance.
Secondly, in addition to its financial advantage, it is also make us live happier. For example when there is whole family together we do something funny or creative which means spend time happier. In contrast living individually is boring; there is nothing to do when you are all alone. By writing this example I give an idea that if you want to live then happy stay with your parents.
Last but not least the most important statement that why I choose living with parents is I can help them, I can care them, and I will make them happy. According to the study most adults left their home when they have own life which means they left their parents too. But in my opinion, I rather living with them for my entire life because they are the person who take care for my all their life and why cannot I do the same thing for them?
Therefore, when it comes to the decision of living whether live alone or family as far as there offered I choice, I would always prefer living with my parents happily without any doubt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
... to its financial advantage, it is also make us live happier. For example when there...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...tive which means spend time happier. In contrast living individually is boring; there is...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...t important statement that why I choose living with parents is I can help them, I can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49858356941 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21758212322 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2009889622 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250469646685 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927589414476 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037558025064 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142946013369 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199118060511 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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