Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
In today's modern world, young individuals have been involved in a struggle about their life style. people, based on their personality and viewpoints, are categorized into two different groups. Some of them prefer to live an independent life as soon as possible, while others believe otherwise--that is--living with their family for a longer time. I, for one, subscribe to the former group for quite a few reasons, three conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, living independently, by which young adults flourish their values, usually results in successful and prosperous life. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that when young people live independently, they will have new experiences and sometimes obstacles with which they learn to how deal. In fact, the more in an independent manner they live, the more successful they would be. Evidence has also demonstrates that many managers of famous companies have lived independently when they was young. However, by living with parents for a long time, people cannot enjoy such invaluable experiences since all they do not make effort for their needs.
Additionally, it stands to reason that living independently exerts a significant influence on our personality, and it has several advantages namely patience, endurance, hopefulness, to name but a few. In addition independent people often have better life with their spouse. On the other hand, people who lived with their parents are usually selfish and unreliable, and these characteristics lead to considerable conflicts with their spouse. Another benefits of independent life is giving people strong personality by which enduring unpleasant crisis become easily. Indeed, life has many ups and downs, for example economic and emotional drawbacks.
Eventually, by independent life of youth, better relationship between immediate family members can be acquired. Due to differences between parents and children in terms of behaviors and attitudes, some disagreements and conflicts may occur. independent adults have less arguments, in contrast. In other words, not only does independent life improve one's values, but it can strengthen ties between family members as well.
All in all, I have a penchant for living independent for young adults on the grounds that it can bring about more success, proper personality, and stronger relationship. Therefore, let's not take independents life of youth for granted and encoruage them to live independently which can pave the way to better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, in fact, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53092783505 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06415877143 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564432989691 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0804656289 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.3 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40234554196 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122013002138 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088736096035 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220678779094 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580653220682 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.