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Advertising is a great way to attract potential customers to buy a product. While advertising the business companies use many strategies so that their products can appear to be superior than other similar kinds of products manufactured by other companies. In doing it they sometimes overstates about their products.
To begin with, business companies invest a lot of money after advertising. They do it so they can make people aware of their products. If their advertisements are attracting enough, they would make profit as customers will buy their products in great number. As they invest a lot of money in advertising, it is usual that they will hide the drawbacks of their product lest they will lose the attraction of the customers. For example, car companies often use celebrities like famous car drivers to advertise their brand new cars. Those drivers advertise by saying that the car is so fast. However, the manufactores never mention that as the cars are so fast they burn oils faster, and hence they would need more fuel. Car producers do it as because spreading any negative imformation will make their product less attractive, and the money they used in the advertisement would be wasted.
Moreover, advertisements are for attracting customers to the products. So any negative information, naturally, would encourage the customers to eschew from buying those products. Hence, business companies, most of the times, never underscore the drawbacks of their products. For example, continual use of facial creams causes skin diseases. But companies never mention it in their advertisments. While advertising manufactureres presents informations which includes the benefits of creams only. They try to show how improved their products are compared to the other products in the market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...heir products can appear to be superior than other similar kinds of products manufac...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'overstate'
Suggestion: overstate
...r companies. In doing it they sometimes overstates about their products. To begin with, ...
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Line 2, column 628, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... However, the manufactores never mention that as the cars are so fast they burn o...
^^
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ever mention it in their advertisments. While advertising manufactureres presents inf...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...informations which includes the benefits of creams only. They try to show how imp...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30877192982 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96198547537 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5515527861 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0555555556 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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