laim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment.Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.

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laim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment.

Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.

Boredom hardly arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation and hence, there is nothing to be embarrassed as boredom cannot be related to self-satisfaction.

Human on earth used to involved in varieties of activities: some are engineer, some are doctor, some are scientists while there are some who are socialist. Boredom is a term which is true for each and every person as true death is. Any person doing a particular job can become bore. However, though boredom comes from doing a same routine job everyday, it has nothing to connect with lack of imagination and self-motivation. For example, Rabindranath, novel winner in 1913 for ''Gitanjali'', was a great writer, poet, novelist. There is hardly any field of literature in which he had not left his footprint, not only that he was quite successful in each and every genre. Even a ingenious prodigy like him often felt bored. While living in Kolkata, the capital of india then, he often felt bored to the city hectic life and inorder to get rid of his boredom he used to take a visit to the river side of Padma which is in Bangladesh. There he lived a village life with the village people and enjoyed the bucolic view of pastoral life. So, it is the hectic city life which can be imputed for his boredom as his imagination is thing what we cannot challenge at all. At the same time, Robi never felt embarrassed about boredom, on the other hand actually had written some of his best poems on boredom.

Similarly, self-motivation cannot be imputed for boredom of human. We may all know about Bangabondhu sheikh mujib, the founder of Bangladesh and a great leader. He by self motivation realized that in order to enjoy the true savor of happiness his country must be freed from the autocratic rule of Pakistan. It is his self-motivation which must be kept sacred. Even he felt bored on certain stages of his life. On his incomplete Biography, was brutally killed by rebel group, he wrote in order to remove his boredom he used to visit his hometown Gopalganj. So, boredom is equally true for a person lacking self-motivation and for a person like Mujib.

However, it may be true that for certain person who has nothing to do, has no imaginary capability and is deprived of self-motivation feel always bored. However, it is there feeble mood which is responsible for boredom not their lack of imagination or self-motivation. If he makes himself involved in any work even then he may feel bored as it is a general truth for each and everyone in this world.

Boredom is nothing to do with lack of imagination and self-motivation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...dom comes from doing a same routine job everyday, it has nothing to connect with lack of...
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Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...uccessful in each and every genre. Even a ingenious prodigy like him often felt b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, while, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74722838137 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89000043201 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461197339246 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.679444369 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0869565217 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6086956522 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288724281026 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10677533018 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12444508409 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265204780713 0.150359130593 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12840743872 0.0667264976115 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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