laim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Boredom is a state where we are not motivated to do anything. Lack of work can also be one of the reasons for it. when we are bored we generally express it with a sense of self satisfaction but the claim suggests that it really must be a source of embarrassment. Then reason for the claim is given as we are bored because of less imagination and self motivation. I support this claim up to an extent.
Let us take an instance where a person is really bored because of his job. He is disinterested because of the pedestrian and same work the person has to do repeatedly everyday and wishes for a change. As a result of this there will be absence of motivation in him to work. Here being bored cannot be viewed as an embarrassment because it is not because the person has no imagination or self motivation. In contrast there is more motivation to do work but the absence of opportunities to work more was a result of apathy.
Conversely if we consider the case about the summer holidays which students. they feel really bored if there are no plans and end up squandering a lot of time which is not a good sign. For this case we can consider that being bored is due to no motivation and can be considered as an embarrassment.
On the other hand some of the students spend some time on their avocations when the feeling of weariness arises in them. So the feeling of being bored has caused a good result as they had used their time effectively when it arises. Therefore here it cannot be viewed as an embarrassment rather a symbol of motivation to move on with our life without wasting time.
From these instances we can come to a conclusion that boredom is a sign of embarrassment only when we let the feeling overtake us and we end up doing nothing. Once we use the time we are bored with some useful work considering it as a sign of alert, it can never be viewed as an embarrassment and is rather a factor of motivation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s no imagination or self motivation. In contrast there is more motivation to do work but...
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Suggestion: Conversely,
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, really, so, then, therefore, as to, in contrast, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42061281337 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75469579846 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431754874652 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1958407678 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191444806335 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649504740764 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682796902313 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111202323905 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088194313618 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.1639044944 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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