Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
When it comes to the issue the selection between living on campus or out of university, some students think that advantages of living in dormitory are more than that of living out of campus. However, others maintain the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that the dormitory allows students have more convenient life and teach them many things. As we all know, most students left home for first time and therefore they have not experience about independent life. Plenty of students live in the dormitory, so they can lean more about the life and how to deal with routine problems from each other. In addition, they do not need to pay monthly bills or cooking for themselves. I think that there is not a better example than myself when I was studying in the university and I live out of campus. At that time, I have not any knowledge about the real world and how to communicate with others, which lead me to feel lonely and isolated. However, I moved to the dormitory and thee I learn many things, which makes m life comfortable
A further point we must consider is that Students can save much money by living on the campus. In fact, when you live in the dorm, you have access many free facilities of university the internet, cable, or even laptop. In addition, most of facilities in the dormitory are common and students can pay less money for them. Moreover, you have not to pay money for commute between your home and the university, which is a great predicament in the large city with heavy traffics.
In contrast, plenty of students usually live in the dormitory, because of its advantages, and this cause you never feel privacy. In fact, you live at least with two or three students in a room, and surely; it put your privacy on the line. For instance, you have to use the common bathroom, or you can not play music at midnight without home mates’ authority.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that living in dormitory helps students to save money, have comfortable life. Admittedly, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite view partly reasonable that you never feel privacy in the dorm, which is not desirable. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
... first time and therefore they have not experience about independent life. Plenty of stude...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the facilities') or simply say ''most facilities''.
Suggestion: most of the facilities; most facilities
...et, cable, or even laptop. In addition, most of facilities in the dormitory are common and student...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'at least', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221294363257 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.133611691023 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0835073068894 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0563674321503 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0688935281837 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141962421712 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0104384133612 0.0351676179071 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.57496775296 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0187891440501 0.0309702414327 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0814196242171 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104384133612 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0208768267223 0.0139019557991 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2422.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 419.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78042959427 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295942720764 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243436754177 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17661097852 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114558472554 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57496775296 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496420047733 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.0188138382 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.95 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1666633729 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.2936754177 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.4435483871 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44507971807 0.300154397459 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0954424733655 0.103427244359 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0706305379142 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505614858458 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136065396122 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166721291126 0.114077575197 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104056536991 0.0781384742642 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354798448143 0.336927656856 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0877095538402 0.067059652881 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29841638415 0.210909579961 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784022260927 0.0618886996521 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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