Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community.

Nowadays, the place of living plays a crucial role for students during their university studies. In addition, no one can deny that the place of living should be very convenient place, as well as place where the students will have the feeling of belonging. However, there has been a long-standing discussion whether students should live in an apartment or not. Opponents hold the view that living in an apartment has too many downsides, while, advocates have the opposite viewpoint. In this regard, I believe that the negative sides of living in apartment overweight the positive ones. In the following essay, I will elaborate both the disadvantages and advantages of living in an apartment, and vice versa. The first beneficial thing of living in an apartment is the fact that students aren't distracted by others in the time of the studies. In my opinion, this positive side is very crucial factor for students and it could affect their grades positively. For instance, if students lived alone than they wouldn't be disturbed by their neighbours. As a consequence, students would be more concentrated and motivated to study in a quiet and peaceful place. Personally, during my studies, after 3 years life in dormitories I decided to rent an apartment - the results was astonishing. In the last year of my studies I drastically increased my GPA as a result of live without roommates. On the other hand, there are also many negative sides of living in an apartment. From my point of view,  living in an apartment is very expensive. As a result, many students choose to live in dormitories. Moreover, students would be supposed to pay bills and other residential costs which isn’t a case in dormitory. Furthermore, students could become very introverted. For example, students who live in dorms usually interact with their peers in a leisure time or during the parties, which are frequently maintained for weekends. In addition, students who live in apartment usually don't have opportunity to interact with others, and that increases the level of depression, aggression and causes many other mental health problems. In contrast, living in dorms with a hundred other people  and sharing a dining room, entertainment room and other dorm's facilities could boost our mood and diminish our stress level. In weighing the pros and cons of this topic, I could confidently say that living in an apartment is better way of living throughout the university years. I agree that in this way students could be very isolated, but we shouldn’t neglect the facts that students could do numerous different activities not related with the university that could make their life better. Going in cinema, hosting a party or attending at gymnasium classes are only a small part of the things they could do throughout the studies. As a result, through living in apartment they would have more freedom and concentration which is very important for them, especially during the exam period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4268.0 1977.66487455 216% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 591.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.22165820643 4.8611393121 149% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93056706295 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.49369408631 2.67179642975 280% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445008460237 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1182.6 618.680645161 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.51630824373 132% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.04969738 48.9658058833 435% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.0 100.406767564 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8636363636 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145085026211 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952497375226 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733974144958 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145085026211 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 11.7677419355 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.2 10.1575268817 179% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.89 10.9000537634 228% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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