Students at universities often have the choice of places to live They may choose to live in university dormitories or they may choose to live in apartments in the community Compare the advantages of living in the university housing with the advantages of

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Students at universities often have the choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in the university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.

Although some students may prefer to live off-campus because of advantages like privacy and the chance to relate with local communities that comes with it, I prefer to live in the university dormitory because of the following reasons.
First, there is no need to travel down to campus every day and one would have the opportunity to get to classes -especially early morning classes- earlier than those who live in apartments that are off-campus. For instance, if a person who reside on campus and a person who resides on the community leave their respective apartments at the same time, it is quite impossible for the person who leaves off-campus to get to the class earlier than the one who resides on campus. Therefore, it is easier to get to campus events earlier, without unnecessary waste of time, if one resides in the university hostel. So, the chance to safe some minutes every day instead of waiting such time in transit makes me prefer the idea of living on campus.
In addition, I believe it is better to live on campus because it is not as expensive as living in apartments outside the university campus. This is because the university dormitories are generally much cheaper than similar apartments off campus. Apart from that, one has to spend money every day one needs to come on campus on transportation. The accumulation of these transport fees and the extra amount spent on accommodation makes it more expensive to live in the community rather than in university dormitories. For example, during my days as an undergraduate, I lived off-campus during my final year at my alma mater. During this period, I had to set aside a certain amount of money for transport to the university and also from the university back to my place of abode. This made my strained financial status even more precarious; so I had to move back to the university the following year because of these little additional expenses. On that note I am against the idea of living outside the university campus especially foe someone who is not financially buoyant.
In conclusion, I prefer living in university dormitories to living in apartments of campus because living in the university saves time and makes one get to classes earlier, and it is also less expensive than living off-campus.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88402061856 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82988634441 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44587628866 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9279703431 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.357142857 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305356324327 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133903130976 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103546701155 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253101509607 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101816414948 0.0645574589148 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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