Students in a university club want to help others, but they can only choose one project a year, which one of the following is the best? 1. Help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics; 2. Help people who cannot afford to build or rent a home to build a house; 3. Visit and assist elderly people with daily tasks
with daily tasks.
There is no doubt that Universities decision in helping other people play the predominant role in our society. The students can choose some duties which have profound effect on their or other affected people's lives. A controversial question is raised related to the issue is that what works the students should perform. Although some people may hold this viewpoint that students should help the people who cannot afford to the building or visit and assist elderly people, in my perspective, helping primary school students to improve their mathematics and reading is the most significant task the students can do. In what follows, I will pinpoint three of outstanding reasons.
One of the most important reasons coming mind related to the statement is that helping primary school students provides an opportunity for them to thrive their talents. This means that teaching them and detecting their flaws motivates and helps them to improve their abilities and be prosperous in their life. Take Dr. Rafiei, one the most prestigious philosopher in the world, as an example. Although he was very resourceful and full of idea, he used to be a sheltered and shy person when he was in primary school and at the same time his father's friend was a university students. He was able to detect his behavior and educational flaws after he was educated by the tutor, his father’s friend. If he did not meet him, he may not be a successful person. So, education is more important than other tasks.
Furthermore, the equally important reason supports my idea is that primary students are the county’s authorities in the future. Consequently, by improving their educations, the society and country will be improved. Primary students' life will go through great chance with this help. The young students try their best to make their dreams about being famous come true, however most of them may out their steps in erroneous way or are deprived from the help. An empirical test in Asia clearly demonstrates that above 80 percent of the authorities have employed the university students' consultants when they were young. This shed the light on the education improvement in young period has the main impact on students’ successfulness.
The last but not the least reason is that this task can be improved some abilities in university students. This learns them the lessons such as; responsibility management and etc which will be beneficial for their future life and career. For example helping primary students educates them how to manage their time and lecture. According to this fact that having the influential show off and good management ability play the significant role in the workplace. Therefore, learning these abilities helps them to secure their future lives. This means that helping the primary students have more advantageous than other tasks for university students.
From what has been mentioned, we can easily reach the conclusion that helping primary students to improve their mathematic and literature abilities is the best task that one club in university can take. We cannot disguise the fact that other tasks such as helping homeless people or visiting elderly people are important. Despite of this fact, helping young students have more merits for both type of students. All in all, it is anticipated that students in university try to help younger students who are in the schools in order to mentioned advantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23113964687 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.168539325843 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104333868379 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0321027287319 0.046263068375 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0642054574639 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109149277689 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0481540930979 0.0351676179071 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74356565396 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024077046549 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0963081861958 0.0887237588012 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0256821829856 0.0209618222197 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016051364366 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3453.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 563.0 408.028673835 138% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13321492007 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367673179396 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287744227353 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206039076377 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127886323268 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74356565396 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484902309059 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.5253946682 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4137931034 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3562723162 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.068965517 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4137931034 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.379310344828 0.644075263715 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.1882158388 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.46666666667 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454123460629 0.300154397459 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.092717929292 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0917942285388 0.0752933317313 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464034794584 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151995442531 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145622102068 0.114077575197 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917381251826 0.0781384742642 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398902737796 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0622664165597 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317362019775 0.210909579961 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707461369788 0.0618886996521 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8870967742 193% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 21.0 8.42114695341 249% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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