Some peoples thinks that to be successful in one's future career he or should have ability to relate and communicate with the people. To state this they cite the importane of social life to be successful in ones work life. However i strongly dissagree with the statement and believe that to be successful in future's job one should study hard in school life because it is students responsibility to study hard in his school life. I support my view point for following two reasons.
In the begining, in sudent life students have only one main duty in their's life, and that is to study hard. For this student should study hard in their student life. If a student don't study well in his student life and waste times in other unproductive activity, soon he will suffer for his neglegance, in his career and also in his social life. For example, if a student studied hard in his student life, then soon he is going to get a better job and better career in his future life. But on the other hand, if a student wasted his time, soon he is going fall in pit fall and suffer for his neglegancy. For that he will not able to get a good job or good career and thus he will be frustrated as a result this will also <span class="highlighter highlight-on">hamper</span> his future social and private life.This example shows that, it is important for student to be serious about theirs study in their's school life. Otherwise, even a meritorious student will not able get a good score and not a good career in his future life. As a result his future life will be pain full, frustrating one.
Secondly, student period is not the time to know about people or social life. Because, its the time for someone to get prepare for his future career. Humans spend a huge part of their's life to be socialilzed. They try to meet with people and stay connected with the. Because human's are social in nature. There's a lot of mind game and politics are in society and student should not be get <span class="highlighter highlight-on">involved</span> in those, also student's are immature to understand and realize those tricks. Moreover, a student can know and learn a lot about his society throught his study. Because, thers are subject like social science or psychology or behavioural science, which'es talks about specificaly the human nature and society. For this, a student throught his well education can learn a lot and more better about society. And for that he should be more serious about his study and should <span class="highlighter highlight-on">industrious</span> about his study. Because only study will help him to build a strong ground for his life and study will make him a knowledged and respected person in the society.
To conclude, the issue that for future job success the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in scool, is a complex one. Some can suggest that humans are social creature and they need to be serious about theirs social life and communicate with people, which also can make them successful in their's job life. Neverthless, i still contend that study hard is student's only main duty and throught study they can have a better job life and successful carrer in their's future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2688.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45081327297 2.67179642975 129% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.367857142857 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 836.1 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1777763891 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279759333168 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102299666472 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137874785385 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235361355004 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11260562631 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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