supervisor and its qualities
A good supervisor and its qualities, this is the topic which is really very important to discuss nowadays, as all the companies those who are going to develop they need good supervisoin and for good supervision a good supervisor is the key factor. Here I would like to explore this topic by giving few examples.
First and formost, the superviosr is the one who develops the stratagies to make the business florish so if he is the one who is sincere to his staff and the workers under him than its is the only way the busniess can develop and can get more fame. the quality of sincerity is really important in this sense. For instance, one of my previous supervisor was really a sincere person. He worked and struggled so hard for the employees and their pay scales. He developed a plan to increase the daily wages of the staff and struggled for two years and atlast the company's CEO agreed to do so. Due to his these efforts the staff get raised in pay scales and they didnt resigne from their jobs.
Morever, the other most improtant quality is the passion of any superviosr. He should be passionate enough to perform his all activities and work hard. One of my senior staff supervisor he was passionate to spread awareness about his field to the whole country. He once spread the awareness of his field that was an emerging one by organizing a very grand event in his hospital, as he was a Physicaltherapist. His this passionate to work and thinking gave him so much fame that all the social medias got aware of his this effort.
In conclusion, the best supervior is who has positive thinking, sincerity and passion to work hard for his subordinates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60738255034 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64537887042 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6426860562 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0714285714 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138360477056 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471686239275 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596328644245 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766993951453 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540509305466 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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