It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.
Ideas and concepts are key to any learning.As learning is a never ending process and we are here to learn each day a new concept and idea.Due to this great truth i believe that for understanding it’s important to know about ideas and facts behind it rather than just learning facts.I will give twofold for my this statement.
Firstly we can think about ideas and concepts what they are. In real it means that if a student in a class is trying to understand the concept of any question or any topic he should understand the basic idea about that topic, for example when I was preparing for my medical boards exams, I was trying to understand each concept about the answers of the practice questions those were expected that they can be repeated in final exams, but with twists, so that I was understanding that what is the main idea behind the topic is, if I have the basic idea about the topic I will be able to solve it with no difficulty otherwise it can create great hindrances in solving difficult questions during the exam.
Furthermore, understanding about ideas and concepts have a key role in any student’s life especially when they solve the Mathematics paper during tests, for example, if a student learns that solving an Algebra question is a piece of cake by just learning the formula by heart and having no understanding of basics of Algebra equations and formulas, than it can create a big ambiguity for that student in any exam of life or during normal daily mathematics questions, so hence proved that getting main ideas, understanding concepts are the key to success,just learning the facts is not the way to get success.
In a net shell, I will repeat that learning is a continuous process, but understanding the basic concepts and ideas behind any topic is far more better and rewarding than just learning it for sometime and than forget that easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76595744681 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70786382446 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462006079027 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.1344086022 323% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 224.726144451 48.9658058833 459% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 313.6 100.406767564 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.8 20.6045352989 319% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.45110844103 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443107195264 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.266410934459 0.076458572812 348% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110976788576 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311430754296 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751890130421 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 11.7677419355 288% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 58.1214874552 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 10.1575268817 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.0537634409 279% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.