Suppose the following two jobs would pay you the same. Which one do you prefer：
a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days
a job that is not so challenging and interesting but more vacation days.
Job is an important part of people’s life, if people want to live a better life they have to choose their jobs comprehensively. As far as I am concerned, I like to do a job with challenging and interesting projects but fewer vacation days, and two reasons will suffice here to support my point of view.
First of all, this kind of job can benefit people a lot for their future career. Since the projects are really challenging, people have to work hard on them. Besides, the projects are so interesting that I will feel motivated and try my best to finish them. In order to do a good job, people need to search some information on the Internet, do a number of readings or ask other co-worker for help and so forth. During the whole process, people are able to learn a lot about the professional information from the projects. Even though they are very tired after work and they may stay up late for several days due to the difficult projects, they are more likely to become successful in the future. In this case, a few holidays do not matter to them. Therefore, choosing a job with difficulties and interesting things is a wise decision.
Apart from that, for a job with difficulties and interest help strengthen relationship between with colleagues, I prefer to choose it. Take me for example, I worked as a teacher in a language training school, and I taught a bunch of kids simple English grammar and some English words. This job seemed very interesting because I could spend plenty of time with children, who were so cute and funny. However, I usually met a few problems that I could not handle, which was a typical situation among other teachers. Thus, I usually asked my co-workers Fiona for help. As time went by, because we often had conversations and discussions about how to deal with some issues and we knew more about each other than before, then we became good friend. Accordingly, the work with difficult and interesting projects but less vacations is more appealing than the work is not so challenging and interesting.
As the two reasons mentioned above, it is easy to draw the conclusion that the job with difficult and interesting projects is a better choice than the job that is boring but has more vacations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f people want to live a better life they have to choose their jobs comprehensivel...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vacations is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... difficult and interesting projects but less vacations is more appealing than the wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69620253165 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76588042694 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539240506329 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2827417147 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.055555556 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342496984238 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104267466313 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975949126427 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233120932752 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046133830734 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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