Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is viewed as a bad quality for a person to have. But now it’s considered as a good quality of a person. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In the modern era, making a decision play a prominent role in the individuals’ lives. No century witnessed progress in technology rather that 20th century did. A controversial question which arises here is whether allocating a lot of time to make an significant decision is considered as good quality or it isn’t valuable. As far as I am concerned, not only assigning a lot of time to decide for important situations in our life isn’t a bad quality, but also it helps us to choose the best way so we don’t waste our time to return to proper way. In the following paragraphs, my view point will be elucidated through two remarkable reasons.
First and foremost, it is established beyond doubt that we encounter difficult situations that should make a decision for the rest of their life while they are nervous about future so if we want to make the best decision, we should ask others such as friends, family and our teachers to detect our faults can result in consequences. As an example, when I was a student, I needed to choose my major in the university while I was in a dilemma. Although I spent a lot of time to search in internet and went to the universities to ask questions about majors’ job opportunities in the future, it helped me to find exactly what I want and make an elaborate plan.
The second pivotal reason that is worth being taken to account is that sometimes making a precise decision not only is vital, but also it can lead to irreparable situations. For instance, when a family wants to decide about divorce while they have a child, they cannot overlook about consequences. There is no difference how much they should allot time, definitely it can be momentous point of their life.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that taking a lot of time to make an important decision is a good quality of a person. You should not ignore a various aspects so that every thing can play a unbelievable effect in your life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: an
...us aspects so that every thing can play a unbelievable effect in your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, second, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67630057803 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9082211072 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534682080925 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9513542827 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289345180587 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101563186608 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125298435493 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184628636282 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107574765891 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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