Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is viewed as a bad quality for a person to have. But now it’s considered as a good quality of a person. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Value is changing all the times with the development of modern society. Nowadays, people draw their attention to a value that whether people should spend lots of time to make a decision. Ones claims that we should definitely consider more time in order to make an important decision. Others, on the other hand, they strongly contend that we ought to seize the chance and make an important decision in a short time. For my perspective, I stand with the latter opinion with following three main reasons.
The first coming into my mind is that important affairs are also with a limited time which means it does not have enough time to think thoroughly. It is not hard to imagine that a student to determine which graduate school that he should come after he got the admission letter. However, the letter will shows a clear deadline for this fundamental decision. In this way, we have to consider some of the main advantages of the school, and think than how much chance that we get the offer from our dream school. Thus, we can compare what we got with what we maybe get in the future, in order to make the best decision in a limited time. By this way, we can get a graduate school for the coming semester at least. It is a true but painful experience from my friend that he hesitated that which school he should go, and he compared these two school in too many aspects, which makes much more difficult for him to make the final decision. As a result, he took a wrong school due to overwhelming analysis. Therefore, we ought to make decision in a short time.
The second aspect to point out is that what provokes people to make quick decisions is showing their analytical ability. As a matter of fact, one of the rigors of modern hectic life is that people’s lives have a lot of ups and downs and people face with complicated situations that they need to cope with these problems as soon as possible. It is axiomatic that individuals can prove their analytical abilities in these critical situations. To illustrate more, take a case of a person who runs into a huge problem and he has a lot of financial concerns for instance. He should gather enough information, broaden his horizons and analyze the situations and then make a rational decision about how he can solve his problem. in this way, not only does he find best feet forward, but also he prove his ingenious manner to other people. Hence, making quick decision can be highly beneficial.
Admittedly, I have to say that there is some reasons to make a vital decision spending a lot of time to some extent, For example, get a position in a company. However, we may just over estimate this problem. The truth is that company send not only one offer to you but more offer to applicants who applied this position. So Chances are we may lose the position because of costing too much time in decision making.
On the whole, according to above-mentioned points and ideas, it is crystal-clear that making quick decision can be considered as a significant merit’s of individuals since it reflects their analytical ability, and also they can seize opportunities. It is high time overlooking the fact that a person who has hard time for decision-making is a worthy person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: One's
... spend lots of time to make a decision. Ones claims that we should definitely consid...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...ission letter. However, the letter will shows a clear deadline for this fundamental d...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ision. In this way, we have to consider some of the main advantages of the school, and thin...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ion about how he can solve his problem. in this way, not only does he find best fe...
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Line 5, column 758, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the best'.
Suggestion: find the best
... problem. in this way, not only does he find best feet forward, but also he prove his ing...
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Line 5, column 794, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'proves'.
Suggestion: proves
... he find best feet forward, but also he prove his ingenious manner to other people. H...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some reasons'?
Suggestion: there are some reasons
...cial. Admittedly, I have to say that there is some reasons to make a vital decision spending a lot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, at least, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2670.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 572.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66783216783 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65049264334 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 848.7 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8754901764 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1851851852 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236610209392 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716091478391 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602535486629 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153230162895 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452245184819 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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