Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is viewed as a bad quality for a person to have. But now it is considered as a good quality of a person
In contemporary times, increasing people pay attention to find out individuals life value and they endeavor to select the best choice for their future. Thus, the statement whether taking a great amount of time to make a significant decision is a good quality for a person to have or not has become exceedingly debatable and gained a variety of views. From my perspective, I agree that taking time to decide one's future is a great quality.
To start with, it is undeniable that making decision rapidly and grasp the chance when it appears is extremely crucial for people to accomplish their goals. In the fast pace society, the competition between people become more and more harsh. Thus, if one can make a decision rapidly and catch the opportunity, he will be the elite who attain the success. In contrast, if individuals just wait for chances and hesitate, the chance will soon be caught by others. The experience of my father is a great example. He was a computer programmer is a game design company which is a small company and often force people to work over 8 hours a day. Once there was a chance for him to change the job to another company which was an international firm where offered high salary and sufficient social welfare. He aware that this was the only chance for him to change the life so he strived to leave the managers there a deep impression while others just behaved as normal and they felt troublesome to shift jobs. Finally he got a position in the new company and now he is the manager of the branch company, which can afford me to acquire best education resource in the state. Therefore, there is no doubt that making decision quickly is a essential quality for people to grasp chances.
Despite the fact that deciding fast is a great capability for individuals to obtain chances to win the game of life, it doesn't mean that for all the situation people are supposed to make decision fast without consideration. It is really important to take a lot of time to hesitate and take all conditions into account to make a choice, especially for those youth who are struggling to figure out their value of life. For young people who just step to the hustle society and they lack of experience. In this circumstance, it is crucial for them to waste lots of time to think about what they are pursuing, investigate all types fields and ask for help from others, finally, come up with method to make their dreams come true. My sister Mary's experience could be served as a great case. When she was in graduate school she spent a lot of time considering if she want to apply for phd. degree or not. She was an excellent student and she was also curious about the academic career. But she was also attracted by the life after working such as high-paid job, arranging entertainment after work. She considered the problem for a whole year and she did investigation from her friends who are working also she ask her advisor for help. Finally she decided to pursue academic career and now she is joyful every day because she is doing things she loves and she never regrets her choice. Hence, it is really a good quality for people to take time to make a big decision in their lives.
From the above-mentioned examples and argument we could draw a rational conclusion that for some situation if chances suddenly appear people should rapdly decide, while for other conditions people, especially young people they are supposed to seriously take some time to make decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, in contrast, no doubt, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2873.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 615.0 407.700716846 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67154471545 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57111375675 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 212.727598566 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494308943089 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 927.0 618.680645161 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1009931257 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6538461538 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267807381613 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737390783945 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910671203405 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164734643274 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069085651708 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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