Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children of young (aged two to five) age are innocent creature and they perceive what they are shown and act as per what they are being taught. Generally speaking, I believe that television advertisement should not be directed to toward young and they can be influenced easily and they product they might be showing may not show good result to children.
First of all, children cannot decide well about either it is productive or not and they should force to buy the product promoted the advertisement. For instance, I have a nephew of mine four years old, he has seen a advertisement of noodles, fried potato chips on television and now he wants it. My sister it once but since the he is consuming it on regular basis and we are afraid that such unhealthy eating habit might cause health issues on future.
In addition to the incapability of children to decide about the product, children want what they see or hear about and hence if the parents have to buy that product, financial burden will increase to the family. For example, a child of my neighbor around five now wants a mini car as shown in the television costing roughly around a grand and he is forcing his parents to do so. My neighbor are taking a loan to buy that, they are obliged to fulfill their child wish increasing financial burden on themselves.
Finally, children that age should not allowed to watch television often, visual has strong impact on children and can remember thing that not feasible or suitable for the children. They can remember the catchy tune as per the advertisement which may not be appropriate, can harm the other children or themselves as performing the act shown on television. Television sometime shows children as superhuman, reciting or copying such act can injure some children.
By the way of conclusion, based on the argument presented above, I'm of the opinion that in most cases it's beneficial if television advertising should not be directed toward young children. If casts mental impact as well as health issues if children uses product as shown by the advertisement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'he'?
Suggestion: the; he
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
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Message: Did you mean 'watching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: watching
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, by the way, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81792717087 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69621775623 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501400560224 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.2218649039 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.307692308 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266773015078 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998811649635 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805520253905 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160564464348 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901461064638 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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