Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Whether you agree or disagree with the statement made and your views. Use specific reasons and examples to support your views.
Making electronic media advertising on Television should be disallowed from viewing to novice children especially in two to five ages. I completely agree with this statement as this is the best way to solve the problem of deteriorating health and mental problems in children. I think this way for two reasons which I will examine throughout this essay.
First, the reason which strongly got created in the favor of disallowing television advertising will be that, you can see in today’s era on cartoon channels there are advertising shown in increasing manner than the cartoons itself. In a simple understanding if one child likes that cartoon too much and if that channel uses that cartoon to publicize some non-real stunts. For example if it eats biscuit then he can fight with 100 animals. So this kind of weird advertise results in affecting the mental health of the young children because they are not able to take decision at this early age that what is wrong and what is right in evaluating this phenomena. They deeply follows what that cartoon is doing which results in tragedy.
Second, some fancy advertising especially to attract the young children result in the contrariness behavior with parents. For example some company uses certain jacket with the cartoon that children love most to sell that jacket the advertising shows that after wearing that jacket he can fly and children gets obsessed with this idea and trying to do such things will result in an dangerous accident with that children.
Lastly, advertising of junk foods For example pizza, burgers etc. are getting on the minds of these little buddies and by eating this junk food their health is deteriorating in such early age. This shows that how much influence this advertising make on children minds.
In the end I conclude by expressing my strong consent about banning this fancy advertising which will affect children life and similarly I would suggest that parents also should look after the good and bad things for their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'follow'
Suggestion: follow
... evaluating this phenomena. They deeply follows what that cartoon is doing which result...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...trying to do such things will result in an dangerous accident with that children. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, look, second, similarly, so, then, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5715319093 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550595238095 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0661544155 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214203130833 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778709430952 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596040269931 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121377165663 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523118128493 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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