There is going to be a students’ TV show. Which show would you like to watch. Please Give your reasons.
Interview school leaders
Students’ debate on political and social topics
Comedy about school life
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that quality of education in schools going to diminish more and more. In this regard, we need turn our own attention to students and utilize their suggestions.There has been no shortage of debates among scholars on whether political and social topics from pupils’ tongues is useful or just we entail have concentration in interview among school leaders, and comedy in terms of students’ lifestyle. As for this writer’s opinion, I subscribe to the letter idea. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
To come straight to the point, first thing now looming up in my head in area of political and social subjects is that children that sill possess inadequate mental maturity can easily acquire deeper insight into the atmosphere where they live. Simply put, It might be golden opportunity for them not only take that moment of their life full advantage but also it help them to do not take a disscion blindly even in the unpredictable future. Let clarified with a personal experience that I cannot remember vividly but if my mind serves me right it was many years ago when I used to head to school. One of those days, I had participated in a debate based on financial barrier and downturn.To cut loge story short, had I not participate in that debate which can be even teddies for showers, I would not have started my own business and had foresight in my nation, Iran,resently facing interior financial corruption. Thus, it goes without saying that there is a wide rage of privileges to being spent a great deal of precise time.
On the other hand, just watching interviews among leaders and head of school, and pupils ‘life like comic moves would not be wise due to a coplue of underlying course. First of all, I sees hectic life ;thence, so hard is it for me to watch something that is nonsense and wasteful. Beside it is worth mention that vigorous individuals like leaders always in whatever place have a lot of secret; however, some decent ones, namely, me can easily turast them but sill I reckon that I have to be more aware and don’t rely on their speakings. All I am trying to say is that the student, who has suite heart possesses far more rewarding things so as to are being heard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, as for, as to, i reckon, by and large, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75930521092 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74088546415 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622828784119 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.9827398441 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.538461538 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247582053554 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723524077599 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631789003379 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1643647935 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553299587563 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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