These days people enjoy a lot of time away from their work and school obligations Many people use this time to visit new places and learn about them What do you think is the best way to learn about a place you are visiting for the first time Going to a mu | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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These days, people enjoy a lot of time away from their work and school obligations. Many people use this time to visit new places and learn about them. What do you think is the best way to learn about a place you are visiting for the first time?

Going to a museum
Joining a guided tour of popular attractions
Visiting a popular shopping area
Talking to a local resident
Watching a local television station
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.

Some people think that going to a museum and joining a guided tour of popular attractions are the best way to learn about a place being visited for the first time. However, others believe otherwise. They state that merely talking to a local resident would be enough for such a task. In my opinion, museums and popular attractions are the best way to fathom the place to be visited.
First of all, when we visit museums, we understand the history of the place being visited because we can take the original pieces of work from people from the past and read them. For example, my Math teacher was not comprehending the world math, and then he decided to travel around the world and collected all the works from scientists. Finally he could fathom all the science behind the Math. Therefore, this example clearly illustrates the desideratum of visiting museums.
Moreover, another important factor to understand the place around is by joining a guided tour of popular attractions because by doing it, we will get to know the details of the place. For instance, when I was visiting the Louvre's museum in Paris, I had to ask for a guide to take me to all the places in the museum and also, asked him for explanation of them. Thus, this another instance elucidates the necessity of being guided around where I am visiting.
Finally, I strongly believe that joining a guide and going to a museum are the best option to know the place being visited because the guide will tell us about the place's history and the museum we will find the papers of people from the past.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ollected all the works from scientists. Finally he could fathom all the science behind ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., another important factor to understand the place around is by joining a guided ...
^^
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'places'' or 'place's'?
Suggestion: places'; place's
...ecause the guide will tell us about the places history and the museum we will find the...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62589928058 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4113601196 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489208633094 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0200776592 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275782225399 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986709139639 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108739840851 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173965750124 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526904419281 0.0645574589148 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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