These days, people enjoy a lot of time away from their work and school obligations. Many people use this time to visit new places and learn about them. What do you think is the best way to learn about a place you are visiting for the first time?
Going to a museum
Joining a guided tour of popular attractions
Visiting a popular shopping area
Talking to a local resident
Watching a local television station
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
It is critically important to gain enough information about the place to which people travel for the first time in order to enjoy the place and understand matters about the area. Personally, I believe that talking to local citizen will the most essential and effective way to understand the situation of the particular area. I feel this way for two main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, people will be available to comprehend the truth about an unfamiliar place by getting in touch with native resident. Most countries and service facilities tend to conceal their disadvantage in order to be appreciated, which will lead me to draw the facile and incomplete conclusion about the whole region. On the other hand, an individual who experienced a lot of things about the area will probably tell the truth of advantages and disadvantages of the place. My personal history is a compelling example of this. Last year, I went to downtown of the countryside of my country for the first time. I have traveled around different places, and thought that the place was pleasant because things I have seen was nearly perfect. However, when I asked the indigenous denizen about the condition of a suburb, he stated that things are totally different and relentless. Therefore, I went to see the circumstances of the suburb because his statement seems incredible compared to matters that I have seen. Unfortunately, my understanding about the area was completely changed as soon as I see impoverished life condition of the slum. If I had not communicated with the person who lives there, I would not understand the complete situation comprehensively.
Secondly, native people’s perspective may help tourists to comprehend the country’s culture and unique value. When individuals travel to unfamiliar country, things may not sense to them by virtue of some difference between the country and their own nation. However, if they receive additional explanations or understanding from the people from the specific area, their comprehension will absolutely improve. For instance, three years ago, I traveled to Beijing, a hectic city of China. During my travel, I saw a boy eating insects, then I thought that he was eating this because he could not afford other types of food. Afterwards, I told a Chinese man about what I saw in their nation. Fortunately, he told me that insect is their common cuisine, which truly helped me to understand that the boy who was eating insect was not impoverished but usual. Hence, I could understand their culture correctly thanks to chitchat with a native citizen.
Finally, native people will probably help others to be well-informed about the place. Most people going to area about which they do not know well should have enough knowledge about the place in order to go to every important location such as monastery, national park, and stature. Otherwise, they will miss some places due to their lack of knowledge. For instance, three months ago, my friend went to Manchester, city of United Kingdom. Then, old man living for a long time in the Manchester suggested him to watch a football match of premier league. Therefore, my companion told me that he had wonderful time attending the match thanks to recommendation of the old man from Manchester. Moreover, he stated that he would have missed this great opportunity if he had not asked the old man about consultation of traveling.
In summation, I am of the opinion of that when people go to see new places, talking to people living there will be beneficial for them. This is because individuals will understand the underlying truth, comprehend difference of culture, and valuable advice from well-informed others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3135.0 1977.66487455 159% => OK
No of words: 618.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07281553398 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92894249518 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472491909385 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 974.7 618.680645161 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4670582685 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239699899788 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651002165494 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592583652362 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154598645852 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496753669182 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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