Today, parents are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.do you agree or disagree?
As humans living in civilized societies, we are all eager to learn more in our day-to-day lives; education, as a means of learning, plays an undeniable role in one's level of perception. On the other hand, parents' influence on children's destiny is unavoidable making some people believe that nowadays parents are more involved in their children's education compared to the past. From my own perspective, the statement is true; as a matter of fact, I agree with such people and I will explicate my points of view through the following paragraphs.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that they are naturally concerned about their children's future. In other words, they are willing to let their children flourish in their upcoming future because their children's successes are indeed theirs for that matter. No doubt, one of the most important ways of being prosperous is through education. Hence, parents make all their efforts to convince their children to pursue their higher education in order to be thriving in the future since they will be proud of them in such a manner.
Furthermore, the other significant reason would be taking financial issues into account by parents; needless to say, there exist a variety of jobs and occupations requiring academic specialization -- such as Information Technology (IT), Engineering and so forth. Considering such an issue, parents are rationally more involved in their children's education in order to lead them to such prestigious disciplines with high salaries or fringe benefits. To illustrate the concept, take for example a lower-class family in a given society. They have longing for their children's future jobs because they have counted on the potentials incomes they would get which can be helpful to augment the whole family's social level.
And the last but not the least reason justifying the claim is their own experience in such issues. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recently conducted social research, demonstrate that about 70% of parents in United States hold at least a Master of Science (M.Sc) degree from a local or international university. With regard to such academic experiences held by parents, it goes without saying that they will be more involved in their children's education in comparison to what parents did in the past.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, parents pay more heed to their children's education because of their natural apprehension and also regarding financial issues as well as their own experiences in academic stuff they had before. But that was the story in a nutshell; actually there are some other reasons and examples, supporting the claim, which are not mentioned above. All in all, I firmly recommend that parents should pay remarkable attention to their children in terms of considering their education process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, well, at least, for example, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, in other words, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2427.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21935483871 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85245444199 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6402859502 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.764705882 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3529411765 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5882352941 5.45110844103 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299700511784 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106300544863 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107168815367 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189768139374 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389355953206 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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